2014年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2014年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the changes in urban and rural populations in China during 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure. had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural populations experienced a slow decline of 160 million from 1990 to 2010.

The core reasons for observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. First and foremost, as the conductor playing a move-ment of change. Our goverment has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system in city, enabling rural populations to have ample opportunities to find jobs. What is more, an increasing number of rural young believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances working in big city is indispensable. if they wish to achive success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicture phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will likely continue to remain steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural populations will likely continue to dedine.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the changes in urban and rural populations in China during 20 years. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300 million, but by 2010, this figure. had substantially risen to 666 million. In contrast, the number of rural populations experienced a slow decline of 160 million from 1990 to 2010.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

批改：逗号

原文：Our

批改：our小写

原文：goverment

批改：government

原文：young

批改：后加people

批改：加逗号断句

批改：去掉

原文：achive

批改：achieve

原文：depicture

批改：depicted

原文：The core reasons for observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. First and foremost, as the conductor playing a move-ment of change. Our goverment has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system in city, enabling rural populations to have ample opportunities to find jobs. What is more, an increasing number of rural young believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances working in big city is indispensable. if they wish to achive success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicture phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：dedine

批改：decline

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will likely continue to remain steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural populations will likely continue to dedine.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子成分的完整以及正确使用标点断句；语法方面，总体来看语法基础还不错。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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