考研英语一2013年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2013年考研英语一高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语写作模板热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、考研英语一2013年大作文题目

考研英语一2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly, 2) interpret its intended meaning, and3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2013年大作文批改例文

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As shown in the picture, there are a lot of graduate student standing and waiting in front of a crossing road, which would lead them to different direction of their career, such as getting a job or go abroud.

Evidently, the picture intends to convey to readers that how to choose their own future direction is an issue that requires great attention both in graduate students" lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, current graduate students do have a lot of choice, which shows our educational level has a great progress. What is more, how to choose a direction fit themselves also need to be paid attention by graduates.

Therefore, have a lot of opportunity is a double edged sword, which can have a positive or negative influence on the development of young people. When facing this phenomenon, we need to make sure thinking about it dearly and choosing an ideal direction which fit ourselves most.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：nt

批改：加s

原文：o

批改：加s

原文：g

批改：going

原文：broud.

批改：abroad

原文：ossing road, which would lead them to different direction of their career, such as getting a job or go abroud. Evidently, the picture intends to convey to readers that how to choose their own future direction is an issue that requires great attention both in graduate students" lives and in society

批改：描述漫画还是比较到位的，句子结构完整，具体，句式多样，注意单复数哦。

原文：oic

批改：choices

原文：s

批改：shows that

原文：thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, current graduate students do have a lot of choice, which shows our educational level has a great progress. Wh

批改：第二段字数少了一点点，可以再加个一两句哦，句子结构还是不错的，内容丰富充实。

原文：v

批改：having

原文：nity i

批改：opportunities

原文：it

批改：fits

原文：sure

批改：make sure that

原文：inking abou

批改：这里语法完全是错的 ，成分不对哦，make sure that we should think about it deeply and choose an...

原文：ea

批改：deeply

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/20

语法：语法注意句子的成分一定要符合英文语法规则哦，文中多次出现句子的语法错误，成分混乱哦，单复数要注意，文中多处出现a lot of, different这些修饰词，但是后面名词不加s的。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，继续保持。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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