考研英语一2010年大作文写作方向与示例

启航教育在考研英语写作教学中反复强调：词汇与句式的高级化是考研英语作文高分的关键。本文整理的2010年考研英语一批改范例，几乎每一段都包含高分替换词与衔接词，是考研英语一大作文写作锦囊中的代表性范文。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

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英语-2010年大作文. 请在各题目的答题区域内作答,超出答题区域的答案无效 Section IV Writing Part A

47. As shown in the picture, there is a cultural hot-pot full of various cultural factors, including Chinese traditional culture factors and foreign factors. The cartoonist intends to convey to readers that, it is multiculture that plays an important role both in personal life and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On one hand, multiculture can ignite our creativity, and promote personal growth and self-fulfilment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. On the other hand, multiculture holds exceptional significante for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for shaping national morals, further propelling social stability and sustainable development.

In brief, multiculture is a catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we stand for benefit. Therefore, we should actively promote and carry forward multiculture. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brillance.

请在各题目的答题区域内作答,超出答题区域的答案无效

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：factors,

批改：用elements元素更合适

原文：that, it is

批改：that后面不用加逗号，that后面连接的是宾语从句

原文：significante

批改：significance

原文：stand for benefit

批改：固定搭配是stand to benefit

原文：brillance

批改：brilliance

原文：The cartoonist intends to convey to readers that, it is multiculture that plays an important role both in personal life and in society.

批改：抓住了多元文化这个核心寓意

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/20

题目要求：第一段简要描述了漫画并揭示了其寓意；第二段阐述了文化多样性的重要性；第三段总结并发出呼吁。

语言表达：文章中的大部分语言表达是准确的，能够清晰地传达意思。但是存在一些拼写问题和语法问题需要注意。

行文逻辑：文章按照描述图像、分析重要性、总结呼吁的顺序展开，结构清晰。过渡较为自然。阐述了多元文化对激发创造力、促进个人成长的积极作用，并且指出了多元文化对于塑造民族道德、推动社会可持续发展的基石作用。

建议：同学这篇文章完成度还可以，不难看出私下有积累一些好词好句，也建议同学尽快将这些好词好句内化为自己的。一定要自己写文章练习作文，自己写完之后再去借鉴范文，学习范文的优秀表达，这样会更快提升，能在正式考试中根据不同的题目要求写出更切题的文章。另外关于文章内出现的错误需要留心，每次写完之后养成通篇读一遍的习惯，在读的过程中就专注抓语法错误、拼写错误。这些不必要犯的错误一定要扼杀掉！

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