考研英语二2011年大作文怎么写？附例文批改

面对2011年考研英语二大作文，许多同学最关心的是有没有可复制的写作模板。本文带来的高分范文严格遵循考研英语作文模板高分框架，从开头引入、主体论证到结尾呼应，全文清晰流畅，是考研英语考生的必备学习资料。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts certain brand market of automobiles in our country. In 2008, the percentage of China"s brand was 25%, but by 2009, this rate had risen to 30%. In contrast, the number of Japan"s brand experienced a slow decline of 10% during the same period. Meanwhile, the percentage of US"s brand remained stable.

The core reasons for this phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation.In my view, the fundmental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress

made by China"s industry in responding to these changes. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes，our goverment has made tremedous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace，allowing them to afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxury items. Considering these factors, the phenomenon in the chart is unsuprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the number of China"s brand will increase in the following decade.In contrast, the percentage of Japan and US will continue to stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：certain brand market of automobiles

批改：此处重点描述的是变化，可改为 the changes in market shares of certain car brands

原文：Japan"s brand

批改：改为 Japanese brands

原文：slow

批改：改为 rapid

原文：US"s brand

批改：改为 American brands

原文：China"s brand

批改：此处要改为复数 domestic brands 更合适

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

原文：chinese

批改：首字母大写

批改：语法正确，表达也很好

批改：语法正确

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

原文：number of China"s brand

批改：改为 proportion of domestic brands

原文：Japan and US

批改：改为 Japanese and American brands

原文：stable

批改：此处为动词原形，可改为 keep stable

批改：结尾段内容表达不错

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改，要细心，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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