2013年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2013年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the situation of taking part-time jobs among different grades at a certain university. In the freshman year, the percentage of students taking part-time jobs was 66.71%, but by the junior year, the rate had gradually risen to 71.93%. Meanwhile, the proportion of students taking part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from junior year to senior year.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follow. To start with, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, taking part-time jobs has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, job experience is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of students taking part-time jobs will steadily increase in the following decades, especially in their senior year.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：taking

批改：of students taking part-time jobs​​

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the situation of taking part-time jobs among different grades at a certain university. In the freshman year, the percentage of students taking part-time jobs was 66.71%, but by the junior year, the rate had gradually risen to 71.93%. Meanwhile, the proportion of students taking part-time jobs experienced a significant increase of 16.31% from junior year to senior year.

批改：准确描述了图表的数据变化

原文：follow

批改：follows

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follow. To start with, as the saying goes, "On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, taking part-time jobs has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, job experience is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：论据充分，词汇和语法结构丰富

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of students taking part-time jobs will steadily increase in the following decades, especially in their senior year.

批改：good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，定语从句，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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