2011年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二写作冲刺每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2011年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the proportion of different brands in domestic market in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a significant decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brands remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to driving domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of foreign brands such as Japanese brands will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the proportion of different brands in domestic market in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of domestic brands was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a significant decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brands remained stable and steady.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1980s and 1990s, are accustomed to driving domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：hat about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of foreign brands such as Japanese brands will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，词汇无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬，再接再厉。

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