考研英语一2024年大作文真题与例文批改

启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2024年考研英语一大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语一真题备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、考研英语一2024年大作文题目

考研英语一2024年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the picture and the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture and the chart briefly, 2) interpret the implied meaning, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2024年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon, there is a boy, standing in the finess area and saying, "The newly built park at the doonway is really nice" Simultaneously, in the right-hand ban chart, in 2020, the number of parks was 406, but by 2022, the figure had substantially risen to 670.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build many parks, enabling residents to exercise at any time. In addition, as we all know, the outbreak of COVID-19 has impacted every aspect of our lives, significally altering people"s behaviors and choices. Consequently, a increasing number of individuals have started paying more attention to health and exercise. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confiden that the number of exercise participants will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of parks will likely remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：on

批改：doorway

原文：ba

批改：bar

原文：aneously, in the right-hand ban chart, in 2020, the number of parks was 406, but by 2022, the figure had substantially risen

批改：描述漫画和图表比较到位，漫画内容清楚明确，数据比较准确，注意修改一些小错误哦

原文：a

批改：an

原文：ns for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build many parks, enabling residents to exercise at any time. In addition, as we all know, the outbreak of COVID-19 has impacted every aspect of our lives, significally altering people"s behaviors and choices. Consequently, a increasing number of individuals have started paying more attention to health and exercise. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurpris

批改：分析比较到位，内容符合题意和英语语法规则哦，结构完整，具体。

原文：fid

批改：confident

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16/20

语法：语法注意a和an的区别哦。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，但是有错的，注意修改。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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