2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语作文失分点多、提分空间大，一直是2014年考研英语二备考生核心痛点之一。本文围绕考研英语二大作文话题，给出一篇经过启航教育老师精细批改的高分范文，文中不仅有逐句批注，还附有可复制的考研英语二高分写作模板。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts changes of Chinese people in city and rural. In 1990, the number of people in city was 300, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666. In contrast, the number of people in rural experience a decline of 160 during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to make city more suitable for people to live in, fasinating more people in rural come to city. In addition, In the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why many people tend to live in city rather than rural. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of people in city will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of people in rural will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：changes of Chinese people in city and rural

批改：​​changes in the urban and rural populations​​ in China

原文： in rural experience

批改：rural areas​​ ​​experienced​​

原文：300

批改：加million

原文：666

批改：加million

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts changes of Chinese people in city and rural. In 1990, the number of people in city was 300, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666. In contrast, the number of people in rural experience a decline of 160 during the same period.

批改：意思对，注意语法

原文：fasinating more people in rural come to city.

批改： ​​fascinating more people from rural areas to move to the city

原文：rural.

批改： ​​rural areas

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to make city more suitable for people to live in, fasinating more people in rural come to city. In addition, In the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people are no longer content with mere material satisfaction; they also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why many people tend to live in city rather than rural. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：论点充分，语法结构丰富

原文： rural

批改： ​​rural areas​​

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of people in city will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of people in rural will likely continue to decrease.

批改：good

原文：160

批改：加million

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，定语从句，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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