考研英语一2017年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2017年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

In the left-hand cartoon, there is a student lying in the cushion in front of many books and feeling excited with his books. On the contrary, the right-hand portrayal, there is a student sitting in front of the table and taking actions to read his book. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is taking actions that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in our society.

The phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. First and foremost, taking actions can ignite our ceativity, and promote personal growth and self-fulfiliment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. What is more, neglecting actions is like a heavy chain that hinders students’ progress, leaving them with a negative outlook on life, preventing them from shining brightly in future society.

In brief, taking actions is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. Only by doing so can we develop individual potential, fulfill our aspirations and make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：建议将图片中的话都表达出来

原文： in

批改：改为 on

原文：in front of the table

批改：改为 at a table 在桌旁

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图画内容, 表达的主题和图画也是贴合的，但是建议将图片中的话也表达出来

原文：taking actions

批改：但在表达“采取行动”这个抽象概念时，地道的英语通常使用不可数形式的 taking action

原文：the

批改：改为 in the

原文：taking actions

批改：但在表达“采取行动”这个抽象概念时，地道的英语通常使用不可数形式的 taking action

批改：语法正确

原文：actions

批改：改为 action

批改：语法正确

原文：neglecting actions

批改：改为 daydreaming i

原文：,

批改：改为 and

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

原文：actions

批改：改为 action

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14分/20分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明了个人观点，和图画的内容很贴合

语言表达：存在几处语法问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改，要细心。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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