考研英语一2010年大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2010年考研英语一批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语一作文真题教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there are a lot of ingredients, including Shakespeare, Kungfu, Peking Opera, Lao She and Swan Lake and so on, in the hotpot. Several Chinese characters can be noticed, which say that the cultural hot pot is both nutritious and delicious. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that cultural fusion plays an important and positive role in our lives and makes the society more diverse and vibrant.

This phenomenon is thought - provoking. In modern society full of changes, chances, and challenges, it"s very necessary for us Chinese to learn the essence of foreign cultures and integrate it with the quintessence of traditional culture. Culture integration can ignite our creativity, which is the driving force for scientific and technological development. In this way, we can safeguard the country"s prosperity and avoid repeating the century - long national humiliation of modern China caused by the closed - door policy.

In brief, only by selecting the kernel of diverse cultures can we achieve true cultural integration. Recognize our own shortcomings through cultural integration, thereby stimulating internal creativity, promoting technological innovation, and contributing to the prosperity and strength of the motherland.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：As shown in the cartoon, there are a lot of ingredients, including Shakespeare, Kungfu, Peking Opera, Lao She and Swan Lake and so on, in the hotpot. Several Chinese characters can be noticed, which say that the cultural hot pot is both nutritious and delicious. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that cultural fusion plays an important and positive role in our lives and makes the society more diverse and vibrant.

批改：描述漫画内容，揭示漫画背后所反映的社会现象和深刻哲理，清晰直观。

原文：This phenomenon is thought - provoking. In modern society full of changes, chances, and challenges, it"s very necessary for us Chinese to learn the essence of foreign cultures and integrate it with the quintessence of traditional culture. Culture integration can ignite our creativity, which is the driving force for scientific and technological development. In this way, we can safeguard the country"s prosperity and avoid repeating the century - long national humiliation of modern China caused by the closed - door policy.

批改：以分论点的形式论述文化融合的重要性，逻辑严谨，层次分明。。

原文：In brief, only by selecting the kernel of diverse cultures can we achieve true cultural integration. Recognize our own shortcomings through cultural integration, thereby stimulating internal creativity, promoting technological innovation, and contributing to the prosperity and strength of the motherland.

批改：总结全文，升华主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：19/20

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：第一段为传统的图画描述段，根据图画中的具体信息，尤其是下面的文字说明，进行直接描述。第二段以分论点的形式阐释图画寓意，文化的融合和交流问题，逻辑严谨，层次分明。最后一段表明作者本人对文化融合和交流这种现象的态度或看法，此评论部分可以提出建议，考虑背景及原因，或描述未来。

整体来看，作文理解了漫画内涵，段落框架明确，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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