2011年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2011年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语二作文模板备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the market shares of some brands in the domestic car market in 2008 and2009. In 2008, the percentage of the domestic brand was approximately 26%, but by 2009,this rate had substantially risen to around 33%. In contrast,the proportion of the Japanese brand experienced a significant decline of about 8% during the same period. Simultaneously,the percentage of the American brand remained stableand steady.

The core reasons for the observed emphenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, the technological ability of domestic cars has been improved,driven by China’s enhanced comprehensive strength.In addition, customers are more willing to purchase more cost-effective products.Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of the domestic brand will steadily increasein the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：and2009

批改：and 2009

原文：brand

批改：brand可数，后面要加s

原文：brand

批改：brand可数，后面要加s

原文：brand

批改：brand可数，后面要加s

原文：brand

批改：brand可数，后面要加s

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the market shares of some brands in the domestic car market in 2008 and2009. In 2008, the percentage of the domestic brand was approximately 26%, but by 2009,this rate had substantially risen to around 33%. In contrast,the proportion of the Japanese brand experienced a significant decline of about 8% during the same period. Simultaneously,the percentage of the American brand remained stableand steady.

批改：对图表内容描述准确，注意名词单复数和空格问题

原文：stableand

批改：stable and

原文：emphenomenon

批改：phenomenon

原文：table

批改：题干是柱状图，用chart更合适

原文：increasein

批改：increase in

原文：The core reasons for the observed emphenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, the technological ability of domestic cars has been improved,driven by China’s enhanced comprehensive strength.In addition, customers are more willing to purchase more cost-effective products.Considering these factors,the depicted phenomenon in the table is unsurprising.

批改：从技术水平和性价比两个角度论证了图表中的现象，注意个别用词问题

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of the domestic brand will steadily increasein the following decades.

批改：表达个人观点，总结全文，注意拼写

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11

题目要求：对图表内容表述清晰，个人观点及论述内容符合题意；

语言表达：全文用了较多的经典句式，但存在较多拼写错误和单复数问题，表达效果有待提高；另外第一段的描述与范围较为相似，练习阶段也可以尝试用自己的语言表达，锻炼下语法水平；

行文逻辑：第一段描述题干内容，第二段给出详细论述，第三段表达个人观点，架构完整；

修改建议：改正原文错误；提升语法水平；提高单词拼写的准确性；

整体来说还不错，仔细一点会更好~

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