2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the market quota of different automobiles with Chinese brands and others in China in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of Chinese brands was approximately 25, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 32. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a significant delicine of about 10% during the same period from 2008 to 2009. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brands remained stable and steady.

The core reason for observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress by China"s automobiles manufacturing industry in responding to changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those brone in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to purchasing domestic auto and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic auto will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of others will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：5

批改：25%

原文：32

批改：32%

原文：elic

批改：decline

原文：from 2008 to 2009

批改：前面写了the same period哦，这里重复了

原文：in China in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of Chinese brands was approximately 25, but by 2009, this rate had substantially risen to around 32. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a significant delicine of about 10% during the same period from 2008 to 2009. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brands remained stable and steady

批改：第一段描述图表和数据还是比较准确的，句子用的比较地道，整体比较通顺。

原文：on

批改：加s

原文：on

批改：born

原文：uto

批改：最好写全称哦

原文：reason for observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress by China"s automobiles manufacturing industry in responding to changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those brone in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to purchasing domestic auto and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：第二段内容写的还是可以的，比较详实丰富，语法每天什么大的问题，词汇适当。

原文： stable

批改：删掉 前面写了下降，这里稳定就不适合了哦，而且加上了stable语法也不对哦

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

语法：语法上注意单复数，最后一句语法有问题哦，按照批注仔细修改哦

词汇：拼错的单词不少，要细心哦。对词汇要加强记忆。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，读起来比较顺畅。

内容：三段结构可以的，字数和内容分配的很均衡，第二段分点写很有逻辑性。注意百分比不能丢哦。

未来可期，继续加油吧。

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