2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts market proportion of domestic automobiles. In 2008, the percentage of Chinese brand was approximately 35%, but by 2009, the rate had substantially risen to around 32%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a signific ant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the number percentage of USA brand remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to have choices of automobiles. In addition,against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic automobiles and have become the primary consumer group.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brand is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： 35%

批改：35%和后面的32%冲突，既然是上升，怎么又下降了呢

原文：Chinese brand

批改：Chinese brands

原文：Japanese brand

批改：brands

原文：market

批改：前面加the

原文：was

批改：are主谓一致

原文：number percentage

批改：改为proportion

原文：brand

批改：用复数brands

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts market proportion of domestic automobiles. In 2008, the percentage of Chinese brand was approximately 35%, but by 2009, the rate had substantially risen to around 32%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brand experienced a signific ant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the number percentage of USA brand remained stable and steady.

批改：开头信息有误

原文：have choices of automobiles

批改：本句不自然，可改为allowing them to choose more automobile brands

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to have choices of automobiles. In addition,against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic automobiles and have become the primary consumer group.

批改：词汇和句型丰富

原文：brand

批改：复数brands

原文： Japanese

批改：Japanese brands and American brands

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，但开头趋势描写错误，会影响老师的印象分；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，注意单复数，形容词修饰和冠词方面的错误；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多学习老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，形成自己的语料库，加油！

考研英语作文话题写作提分高效的方式，是让经验丰富的老师亲自批改你的作文。启航教育2027考研英语斌哥写作锦囊冲刺抢分班，主讲斌哥亲批每一份学员作业，真题作业批改、轻松应对各种复杂题目，让考研英语写作更有底。