2019年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二真题每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2019年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

2019年大作文

The bar chart clearly depicts the options of graduates among a certain university in 2013 and 2018.In 2013, the percentage of working was 68.1%,but by 2018, this rate had decreased to 60.7%.In contrast,the proportion of further education and start-up business increased by 7.7% and 1.3% respectively during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our goverment has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system,enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education.In addition, the quality of being unwilling to be ordinary brings numerous benefits to the growth of graduates. Its core driving force stems from graduates" desire to step out of their comfort zones,embrace a broader future,and gain recognition from others.

What about future trends？I’m confident that the proportion of further education will steadily increase in the following decades .In contrast ,the proportion of working will likely continue to decrease .

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：start

批改：starting

原文：he bar chart clearly depicts the options of graduates among a certain university in 2013 and 2018.In 2013, the percentage of working was 68.1%,but by 2018, this rate had decreased to 60.7%.In contrast,the proportion of further education and start-up business increased by 7.7% and 1.3% respectively during the same period.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes,our goverment has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system,enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education.In addition, the quality of being unwilling to be ordinary brings numerous benefits to the growth of graduates. Its core driving force stems from graduates" desire to step out of their comfort zones,embrace a broader future,and gain recognition from others.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends？I’m confident that the proportion of further education will steadily increase in the following decades .In contrast ,the proportion of working will likely continue to decrease .

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，介词后加动词ing形式；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。

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