2014年考研英语二大作文怎么写？附例文批改

面对2014年考研英语二大作文，许多同学最关心的是有没有可复制的写作模板。本文带来的高分范文严格遵循考研英语作文模板高分框架，从开头引入、主体论证到结尾呼应，全文清晰流畅，是考研英语考生的必备学习资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

Given is a column chart, clearly illustrating the variation among urban and rural population in China from 1990 to 2010. During this twenty years, the population of urban increased enormously which shoot up to twice as much. The popularity of rural declined fractionally. From 1990 to 2010, the total population gradually increased, and by 2010 the urban and rural pop ulation had reached a basic balance.

Such statistics, apparently, can be associated with the urbanization of China"s population. More and more people are choosing to move from rural areas to cities for work and life. To my understanding, at least two fundamental causes can account for this phenomend.For one thing, new forms of urbanization and China"s urbanization policies attract public to pursuer high quality development of life. For another, compared with rural areas, urban areas have more development opportunities for people to choose. So, urban population increased, rural population decreased.

Accordingly, the authorities are supposed to focus not only maintain urban development, but also promote rural revitalization,then promot two areas development together.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：this twenty years

批改：表达错误（应为 “these twenty years”）

原文：population of urban

批改：urban 是形容词，应为 “urban population”

原文：which shoot up

批改：语法错误（应为 “shooting up” 作伴随状语，“shoot” 改为过去式 “shot”）

原文：popularity of rural

批改：“rural population“

原文：population

批改：复数 populations

原文：phenomend

批改：拼写错误（应为 “phenomenon”）

原文：attract public

批改：缺少定冠词（应为 “attract the public”）

原文：pursuer

批改：词性错误（应为动词 “pursue”）

原文： focus not only maintain

批改：语法错误（应为 “focus on not only maintaining”）

原文：then promot

批改：拼写错误（应为 “and promote”）

原文：Given is a column chart, clearly illustrating the variation among urban and rural population in China from 1990 to 2010. During this twenty years, the population of urban increased enormously which shoot up to twice as much. The popularity of rural declined fractionally. From 1990 to 2010, the total population gradually increased, and by 2010 the urban and rural pop ulation had reached a basic balance.

批改：描述图表内容，符合题目要求

原文：Such statistics, apparently, can be associated with the urbanization of China"s population. More and more people are choosing to move from rural areas to cities for work and life. To my understanding, at least two fundamental causes can account for this phenomend.For one thing, new forms of urbanization and China"s urbanization policies attract public to pursuer high quality development of life. For another, compared with rural areas, urban areas have more development opportunities for people to choose. So, urban population increased, rural population decreased.

批改：提出观点，使用了表示逻辑关系的连接词，条理较为清晰

原文：Accordingly, the authorities are supposed to focus not only maintain urban development, but also promote rural revitalization,then promot two areas development together.

批改：结尾段可以适当再加一个句子

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11

这篇图表分析文框架清晰，能准确捕捉 “1990-2010 年城镇人口激增、农村人口下降” 的核心趋势，并关联 “城镇化” 这一核心背景，立意贴合社会实际。但存在较多语法以及拼写问题：拼写、语法错误频发（如 “phenomend”“pursuer”“promot”），基础表达不规范。加强单词的背诵，区分词性。希望继续努力，加油！

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