2015年考研英语二大作文失分点批改

据启航教育英语教研组统计，考研英语作文批改话题连续多年成为考研英语二大作文的高频考点。本文带来的2015年考研英语二批改例文中，考生通过对社会热点的精准分析与地道表达，获得高分，其写作思路可供2027考研英语二考生直接借鉴。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly displays the percentage of the cost of certain city’s residents in Spring Festival. The New Year’s gift takes the lead at 40%, followed by gathering and eating, transportation, and others accounting for 20%, 20% and 20%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of high-speed advancement of our society, people no longer content with material satisfaction, they also pursue spirtial enjoyment. This explains why the New Year’s gift takes the lead rather than gathering and eating. In addition, against the backdrop of our society’s rapid and dynamic growth, the younger generation are accustomed to sending some gifts to others in Spring Festival, and they have become the primary consumer group. Last but not least, as the conductor leading the concert of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth, elevate the purchasing power of the public, allowing them to afford a lot of things that previously deemed luxury items.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The pie chart clearly displays the percentage of the cost of certain city’s residents in Spring Festival. The New Year’s gift takes the lead at 40%, followed by gathering and eating, transportation, and others accounting for 20%, 20% and 20%, respectively.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：people

批改：people are 补充be动词

原文：spirtial

批改：spiritual

原文：that

批改：that were 补充be动词

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of high-speed advancement of our society, people no longer content with material satisfaction, they also pursue spirtial enjoyment. This explains why the New Year’s gift takes the lead rather than gathering and eating. In addition, against the backdrop of our society’s rapid and dynamic growth, the younger generation are accustomed to sending some gifts to others in Spring Festival, and they have become the primary consumer group. Last but not least, as the conductor leading the concert of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth, elevate the purchasing power of the public, allowing them to afford a lot of things that previously deemed luxury items.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of people, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

语法：语言表达和语法基础上，进步的空间还很大。比如本次作文中出现多次的缺少be动词错误等问题，会很拉低你的平均分。另外还需要注意一些基础的语法问题和表达搭配问题，有时间好好看看文中的批改，细心吸收，争取在接下来的练习中避免类似的错误。

内容：图表反映了春节期间的消费类型及其各自的比例。中间段落可以分析消费比例背后的原因，从经济水平提升、传统文化影响、人际交往需求等角度展开论述，强调消费行为与社会文化、个人观念的关联。结尾可以提出适度消费，量力而行的观点。

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