2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语作文失分点多、提分空间大，一直是2014年考研英语二备考生核心痛点之一。本文围绕考研英语二作文范文话题，给出一篇经过启航教育老师精细批改的高分范文，文中不仅有逐句批注，还附有可复制的考研英语二高分写作模板。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts population change for China lunyg and countryside over the course of twesty years. In 1990, the sumber of cing population was three hundreds. but by 2010, this figure substantially risen to 666. Meanwhile, the number of coustryside population experienced a slow declise of 210 during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese soliety is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundmental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s industry in responding to these changes. In addition, an incyeasing humber of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, the chances in thecity is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depilted phenomenon in the chart is unsurporising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city population risen is a clear sigh of social improvement and will steeadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the nawber of countryside population will likely ontinue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： for China lunyg and countrysi

批改：of urban and rural areas in China

原文：ourse of twesty

批改：the twenty years

原文：umber of ci

批改：number of city

原文：hundre

批改：300 million，单位没加上哦

批改：逗号

原文：6

批改：后加million

原文：ecli

批改：decline

原文：210

批改：160 million吧

原文：ation was three hundreds. but by 2010, this figure substantially risen to 666. Meanwhile, the number of coustryside population experienced a slow declise of 210 during the same

批改：描述图表的句子结构还是可以的，但是数据不准确，不清楚，句子多处出现语法和词汇错误，注意修改

原文：ie

批改：society

原文：yeas

批改：increasing

原文：m

批改：number

原文：the chances in thecity

批改：意思逻辑不太对，前面有chances了，这里重复了，more convenient infrastructure and educational resources are indispensable

原文：pilte

批改：depicted

原文：rpo

批改：unsurprising

原文：ng an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundmental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s industry in responding to these changes. In addition, an incyeasing humber of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, the chances in thecity is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depilted phenomenon in the chart is

批改：原因分析还是比较到位的，句子结构完整，但是错误比较多，注意修改

原文：risen

批改：删掉

原文：awb

批改：number

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

语法：语法注意背诵模板一定要准确哦，错了一个标点都会导致语法错误，更别说错了一个单词或者短语了，要仔细哦。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，也有写错的哦，注意修改。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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