2014年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

当你坐在考研英语二考场，面对2014年大作文题目的那一瞬间，是否能快速组织起一篇结构清晰、表达地道的高分文章？本文这篇批改例文，正是考研英语二大作文话题下的标准范本，适合每一位考研英语备考生反复研读。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart depicts the charge of population living in urban and rural from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the numbor of people who live in urban was 300 million, but by 2010, the figure has substantially risen to 666 mellion. In contrast, the number of people who live in rural experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

The core reason for observed phenomenon can be sammized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of change, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford house that were previously deemed loxury items in urban. In addition. as the saying goes," On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, people who live in rural are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, immaging to urban has emerged as their significant choice for living. Considering these factors, the phonomeron depicted is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of people who love in urban is a significant sign of social progress and will steadily increase in followang decades. In controst，the number of people who live on rural will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：charge of

批改：changes​​ in

原文：urban and rural

批改： urban and rural areas

原文：numbor

批改：number

原文：urban

批改：urban areas

原文：as

批改：过去完成时had

原文：mellion

批改：million

原文：rural

批改：rural areas

原文：The bar chart depicts the charge of population living in urban and rural from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the numbor of people who live in urban was 300 million, but by 2010, the figure has substantially risen to 666 mellion. In contrast, the number of people who live in rural experienced a significant decline of 160 million during the same period.

批改：意思对，注意拼写和语法错误

原文：observed

批改：加the，特指

原文：sammized

批改： ​​summarized​​

原文：urban

批改：urban areas

原文：rural

批改：rural areas

原文：immaging

批改：immigrating

原文： urban

批改：urban areas或者cities

原文：phonomeron

批改：phenomenon

原文：The core reason for observed phenomenon can be sammized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of change, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford house that were previously deemed loxury items in urban. In addition. as the saying goes," On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, people who live in rural are compelled to confront immense economic pressure, and as a result, immaging to urban has emerged as their significant choice for living. Considering these factors, the phonomeron depicted is unsurprising.

批改：注意小错误

原文：love

批改：live

原文：urban

批改：urban areas或者cities

原文：followang

批改：following

原文：on rural

批改：in rural areas

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of people who love in urban is a significant sign of social progress and will steadily increase in followang decades. In controst，the number of people who live on rural will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

批改：good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：8/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，但是拼写错误太多了；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，定语从句，非谓语动词和宾语从句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.根据自己的基础，要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，写作和背诵相结合，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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