考研英语一2010年大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2010年考研英语一批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语一作文真题教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

52. As shown in the cartoon, there is a cultural Hot Pot with many elements in it, such as Lao She, Shakespeare, Beijing opera, Postmodern and so on. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey to readers that it is cultural integration that plays an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, cultural integration holds exceptional significance for a nation, as it serves as a crucial cornerstone for boosting overall national strength, enriching public cultural live, further propelling social stability and sustainable development. On the other hand, neglecting cultural integration is like a heavy chain that hinders our nation’s progress, not only hindering its ability to maintain healthy and rapid growth, but also significantly affecting its international image.

In brief, cultural integration is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this practice. only by doing so can we build a more harmonious society and make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：语法正确

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图画内容, 表达的主题和图画也是贴合的

批改：语法正确

原文：,

批改：改为 and

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

批改：语法正确

原文：only

批改：首字母大写

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

原文：live

批改：lives

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17分/20分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明了个人观点，和图画的内容很贴合

语言表达：存在几处细节表达问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：细节表达问题结合作文批注仔细修改，拼写要细心。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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