2015年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

本文将启航教育一对一批改过的2015年考研英语二高分范文进行公开呈现。批改老师对文中每一个失分细节进行了精确标注，对照考研英语写作模板热点话题与评分细则，你可以快速了解考研英语写作的提分方向。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly depicts the percentage breakdown of the spending of our residents during the spring festival in China. The gift of new year takes the lead at 40%, followed by traffic and eating, accounting for 20% and 20%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people’s attitudes towards the spring festival have undergone significant changes. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to buy gifts rather than other behaviors. In addition, as the conductors orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the consuming power of populance, allowing them to afford traffic and eating with friends. Considering these factors, this depicts phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choice of people during the spring festival, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：spring festival

批改：春节首字母大写

原文：The pie chart clearly depicts the percentage breakdown of the spending of our residents during the spring festival in China. The gift of new year takes the lead at 40%, followed by traffic and eating, accounting for 20% and 20%, respectively.

批改：清晰简要地描述了图表信息，言简意赅。

原文：spring festival

批改：首字母大写

原文：eating

批改：改成eat，也是跟在to后面的

原文：depicts

批改：depicted

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people’s attitudes towards the spring festival have undergone significant changes. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to buy gifts rather than other behaviors. In addition, as the conductors orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the consuming power of populance, allowing them to afford traffic and eating with friends. Considering these factors, this depicts phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：spring festival

批改：首字母大写

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choice of people during the spring festival, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，注意节日名字作为专有名词首字母要大写；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础较好。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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