考研英语一2017年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

The cartoon is called "There are Books" and "Reading", which present two completely different reading attitudes: the person in the left picture looks at a full bookshelf and proudly declares that "I have so many books", but there is no trace of flipping through them; the person in the right picture sits quietly at the table, determined to "read 20 books this year" and is starting to practice the reading plan.

The deep meaning of this group of pictures is the sharp contrast between "possession" and "action": many people are addicted to the satisfaction of "possessing resources", but are lazy to turn goals into practical actions; and real growth comes from down-to-earth practice. For individuals, changing "want to do" into "doing" is the key to academic excellence and career breakthrough; for the collective and even the country, only by abandoning empty talk and seeking truth and pragmatism can we move forward steadily in development.

Just as "it is not advisable to talk about soldiers on paper", whether it is studying or doing things, only by replacing the vain "owning" with action can we truly turn the goal into a result and make expectations take root.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： cartoon is called "There are Books" and "Reading", which present two completely different reading attitudes: the person in the left picture looks at a full bookshelf and proudly declares that "I have so many books", but there is no trace of flipping through them; the person in the right picture sits quietly at the table, determined to "read 20 books this year" and is starting to practice the reading plan.

批改：本段很好地完成了对漫画内容的描述，要点齐全。句式有变化，使用了并列和转折结构

原文：deep meaning of this group of pictures is the sharp contrast between "possession" and "action": many people are addicted to the satisfaction of "possessing resources", but are lazy to turn goals into practical actions; and real growth comes from down-to-earth practice. For individuals, changing "want to do" into "doing" is the key to academic excellence and career breakthrough; for the collective and even the country, only by abandoning empty talk and seeking truth and pragmatism can we move forward steadily in development.

批改：这一段深入探讨了漫画的寓意，并从个人和集体两个层面进行了论证，展现了很好的思辨能力。词汇运用也很丰富，如 "addicted to", "down-to-earth", "pragmatism" 等

原文：ust as "it is not advisable to talk about soldiers on paper", whether it is studying or doing things, only by replacing the vain "owning" with action can we truly turn the goal into a result and make expectations take root.

批改：结尾段有力地总结了全文，并巧妙引用了“纸上谈兵”的典故，非常贴切，为文章增色不少。 “vain "owning"” 这个表达也很好地呼应了主题。这个句子结构比较复杂，你处理得已经很不错了

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17

根据评分标准，你的作文内容切题，结构清晰，语法和词汇多样性也表现良好。在衔接和个别表达的准确性上还有提升空间。

总评与建议：

同学，你这篇作文观点深刻，逻辑也很有层次。

主要建议有两点：

注重句间衔接：写完后多读一遍，留意句子之间的连接，适时补充主语或使用连接词，让行文如流水般顺畅。

打磨词句表达：对于一些自己很满意的精彩表达，可以多思考一下是否有更地道、更准确的用法。比如，将“make expectations take root”调整为“make expectations come true”或“make dreams take root”，可能会更贴切。

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