2019年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二作文范文每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2019年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart obviously mirrors the changes concerning the things that graduate students will take part after graduating. To be more spesific, the barchart consists of three sectors. Among them, attain employment decreased significantly, dropping from 68.1% in 2013 to 60.7% in 2018. while the figure of continuing to study showed a sharp upward trend, from 26.3% in 2013 to 34.0% in 2018. What"s more, the rate of doing a business by themselves on the rise slightly.

The phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. In the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitude towards studying have undergone significant changes. The knowledge becomes an important factor in life. This is best illustrated by the fact that an increasing number of people choose to study rather than jobs. Another driving factor behind this phenomenon is the substantial support from the goverment, especially a series of favorable policies that encourage people to learn more knowledge in variety ways, resulting in an increasein the students number.

From what has been discussed above, we can predict the trend is likely to continue for several years in the foreseeable future. As far as I"m concerned, the statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choice of students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era. It will lay a solid foundation for the sustainabl and healthy advancement of our society in the long term.

必须使用黑色字迹毛书写:在答题卡区域内作答,超出黑色矩形边框限定区域的答案无效

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三、考研英语作文批改

原文：attain

批改： attaining 动名词做主语

原文： on the rise

批改：is on the rise 补充谓语动词is

原文：The bar chart obviously mirrors the changes concerning the things that graduate students will take part after graduating. To be more spesific, the barchart consists of three sectors. Among them, attain employment decreased significantly, dropping from 68.1% in 2013 to 60.7% in 2018. while the figure of continuing to study showed a sharp upward trend, from 26.3% in 2013 to 34.0% in 2018. What"s more, the rate of doing a business by themselves on the rise slightly.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文： attitude

批改： attitudes 注意主谓一致

原文：goverment

批改：government

原文：variety

批改：various

原文：increasein

批改：increase in 注意空格

原文：students number

批改：number of students

原文：The phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways, but two of them are particularly significant. In the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitude towards studying have undergone significant changes. The knowledge becomes an important factor in life. This is best illustrated by the fact that an increasing number of people choose to study rather than jobs. Another driving factor behind this phenomenon is the substantial support from the goverment, especially a series of favorable policies that encourage people to learn more knowledge in variety ways, resulting in an increasein the students number.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：From what has been discussed above, we can predict the trend is likely to continue for several years in the foreseeable future. As far as I"m concerned, the statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choice of students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era. It will lay a solid foundation for the sustainabl and healthy advancement of our society in the long term.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

原文： sustainabl

批改： sustainable

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12 /15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

语法：语言表达和语法基础上，进步的空间还很大。比如本次作文中出现多次的单词拼写错误等问题，会很拉低你的平均分。另外还需要注意一些基础的语法问题和表达搭配问题，有时间好好看看文中的批改，细心吸收，争取在接下来的练习中避免类似的错误。

首段总体概括图表主题，详细列出关键数据变化，突出就业比例下降、升学比例上升的趋势；第二段分析原因，可从政府鼓励深造、社会就业压力增大、学生追求自我实现等方面进行论述；第三段评论与展望，预测未来趋势可能持续，并强调其对个人和社会发展的积极意义。

文章整体来说，言简意赅，符合了考试写作提纲的要求，文章表示语义衔接的词语运用不太多，在以后的写作中可以多尝试使用一些表示衔接的词语，这样文章段落内部句内和段落之间的关系就能很明朗的表现出来。同时注意避免单纯罗列数据，可适当引用社会现象或政策背景支持分析，增强说服力。

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