2024年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2024年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二大作文教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2024年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2024年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2024年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of students" primary acception in labor class in a certain university. Learning relevant knowledge by this class takes the lead at 91.3%,followed by promoting their ability of manufacturing by this class at 84.8%.In addition, factors such as having a good mood and builting cooperative ability by this class, accounting for 54.4% and 32.6%, respectively.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes,challenges and chances, having a good academic knowledge is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. In addition, as the saying goes," On life"s stage, pressure is always present." Nowadays, university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure, and as a result, attending this class has emerged as a significant way for releasing their pressure and making themselves have a good mood. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choice of contemporary students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：students" primary acception in labor class

批改：改为 students" main gains from practical labor courses 是精确地道的表达

原文： in

批改：改为 at

原文：their ability of manufacturing

批改：改为 practical skills 更合适

原文：builting

批改：building

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

原文：a

批改：knowledge 是不可数名词，前面不能加 a

批改：语法正确

批改：内容表达不错，也比较具体

原文：what

批改：首字母大写

批改：结尾段内容表达很好

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，表明的个人观点与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在几处语法和拼写问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心，之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，提高自己的语言表达，总的来说写的不错，加油！

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