2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2014年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二作文范文教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change of Chinese town"s population and rurual population. In 1990 years，the number of town"s population was 300 million，but by 2010 years, this figure had substaintially risen 666 million. In contrast, the number of rurual population experienced a significant decline of 160 milliom during the same period.

The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with. As key driver of changes, our government has made significant efforts to promote economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of people, allowing them to afford town‘s house that were previously deemed expensive itrems. In addition, in the wake of the high speed of society. people’s attitude towards life fulfillment has change. People began increasly persuiting high-quality modern city life.This explain why people choose town"s house rather than rurual house. Considering these factors. the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unspurprising.

what about future trends? I am confident the number of town"s population will steadily increasing in the following decudes. In contrast, the number of rurual population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：rurual

批改：rural

原文：years

批改：删除

原文：years

批改：删除

原文：risen

批改：risen to

原文：substaintially

批改：substantially

原文： rurual

批改：rural

原文：milliom

批改：million

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the change of Chinese town"s population and rurual population. In 1990 years，the number of town"s population was 300 million，but by 2010 years, this figure had substaintially risen 666 million. In contrast, the number of rurual population experienced a significant decline of 160 milliom during the same period.

批改：用具体数据描述图表内容，清晰直观，但是建议在段落后面补充这些数据反映的社会现象

原文：itrems

批改：items

批改：改为逗号

原文：change

批改：changed

原文：increasly

批改：increasingly

原文：persuiting

批改：pursuing

原文：explain

批改：explains 第三人称单数形式

原文： rurual

批改：rural

原文：unspurprising

批改：unsurprising

原文：increasing

批改：increase

原文：decudes

批改：decades

原文：urual

批改：rural

原文：The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with. As key driver of changes, our government has made significant efforts to promote economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of people, allowing them to afford town‘s house that were previously deemed expensive itrems. In addition, in the wake of the high speed of society. people’s attitude towards life fulfillment has change. People began increasly persuiting high-quality modern city life.This explain why people choose town"s house rather than rurual house. Considering these factors. the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unspurprising.

批改：以分论点的形式论述这一现象背后的原因，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：what about future trends? I am confident the number of town"s population will steadily increasing in the following decudes. In contrast, the number of rurual population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：总结全文，升华主题

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：首段简洁描述图表核心数据，突出城乡人口变化趋势。中间段分析变化原因，包括经济发展、城市基础设施优势等，同时指出城市化带来的问题。尾段提出政府应采取措施缓解城市化负面影响，体现对社会问题的关注。

整体来看，语言表达和语法基础上，进步的空间还很大。比如本次作文中出现多次的单词拼写错误等问题，会很拉低你的平均分。另外还需要注意一些基础的语法问题和表达搭配问题，有时间好好看看文中的批改，细心吸收，争取在接下来的练习中避免类似的错误。

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