2015年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2015年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The pie chart clearly depicts the percentage breakdown of different expenses during the Spring Festival among residents in a certain city in china . New year gifts takes the lead at 40％ ，followed by traffic, parties and eating, and others at 20% at each .

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. First and foremost, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford some new year gifts that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitudes towards consumpution have undergone significant changes .People not only focus on material satifaction but also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to go out with friends rather than stay at home .

What about future trends? I am contident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfuly reflect the the choices of young people,serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：takes

批改：注意主谓一致，改成take

原文：at

批改：each可以做副词，at去掉

原文：The pie chart clearly depicts the percentage breakdown of different expenses during the Spring Festival among residents in a certain city in china . New year gifts takes the lead at 40％ ，followed by traffic, parties and eating, and others at 20% at each .

批改：清晰简要地描述了图表信息，言简意赅。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. First and foremost, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford some new year gifts that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitudes towards consumpution have undergone significant changes .People not only focus on material satifaction but also pursue spiritual enjoyment. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to go out with friends rather than stay at home .

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：stay

批改：than是介词，改成staying

原文：contident

批改：confident

原文：What about future trends? I am contident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfuly reflect the the choices of young people,serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，注意主谓一致以及介词后加动词ing形式。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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