2015年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

启航教育作为考研英语培训领域的知名品牌，每年都会整理发布当年的考研英语作文模板高分范文。本文呈现的2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文中，每一处失分点都已被老师精准订正，是2027考生不可错过的写作资料。

一、2015年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2015年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2015年考研英语二大作文批改例文

This is a pie chart,clearly illustrating the striking contrasts in residents"expenditure during Spring Festival holidays in a certain city of China.Overall,40% of the money is spent on new-year gifts,which is the largest proportion.Then, the next are transportation and gathering dinners ,with the same 20%.Finally comes the total spending on other items ,at 20%.

Such figures,definitely,can be associated with the significance of the Spring Festival for Chinese,but what results in the differences above ?For one thing,the spring Festival holidays are characterized by the fact that people will take various gifts to visit friends and relative and express their wishes ,which enables the spending of new- year gifts to be the largest share. For another,compared with the past years,an increasing number of youngsters do not work or study in their hometowns ,but they go home to celebrate the Spring Festival with parents and friends by having dinners together. Accordingly, transportation and gathering dinners become a part of their expenditure.

As a youngster,I am fond of traveling during the Spring Festival holidays,which will bring me an opportunity to taste a variety of delicious food ,inspire my passion for different cultures and help me broaden my horizons.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：elative

批改：relatives

原文：the

批改：去掉

原文：enables the spending of

批改：改为：makes the spending on...会好些

原文：As a youngster,I am fond of traveling during the Spring Festival holidays,which will bring me an opportunity to taste a variety of delicious food ,inspire my passion for different cultures and help me broaden my horizons.

批改：偏离主题，转而描述个人 “春节于我而言”的内容，未对图表数据的趋势、影响或建议进行升华

原文：This is a pie chart,clearly illustrating the striking contrasts in residents"expenditure during Spring Festival holidays in a certain city of China.Overall,40% of the money is spent on new-year gifts,which is the largest proportion.Then, the next are transportation and gathering dinners ,with the same 20%.Finally comes the total spending on other items ,at 20%.

批改：列出四项花销占比

原文：Such figures,definitely,can be associated with the significance of the Spring Festival for Chinese,but what results in the differences above ?For one thing,the spring Festival holidays are characterized by the fact that people will take various gifts to visit friends and relative and express their wishes ,which enables the spending of new- year gifts to be the largest share. For another,compared with the past years,an increasing number of youngsters do not work or study in their hometowns ,but they go home to celebrate the Spring Festival with parents and friends by having dinners together. Accordingly, transportation and gathering dinners become a part of their expenditure.

批改：用“送礼习俗+返乡潮”双因解释，逻辑清晰

原文： new- year gift

批改：New Year gifts

原文： new-year gifts

批改：New Year gifts

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：7/15

1.题目要求：字数符合题目要求。文章需要分析图表并写出自己的观点，符合题目要求。但最后一段偏离主题。

2.语言表达：语言表达清晰。没有明显语法错误和拼写错误。

3.内容层面：文章的结构较为清晰，有明确的开头、中间和结尾。但是结尾的内容与主题关系不大。

4.修改意见：这篇文章有效地分析了图表信息，并提供了原因。但在结尾处没有进行主题的升华，而是讲述个人情况，偏离主题。考生要认真学习作文结构内容，一般图表类作文在最后一段会进行未来趋势的预测或者目前的社会现象。

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