2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二作文模板每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2014年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

This is a column chart,clearly illustrating the striking contrasts in populations between urban and rural areas in China.During this period , the urban population climbed remarkably,from 300million to 666 million.By contrast,the rural population showed a trend of sharp decline ,from the peak of 834 million to 674 million.

Such figures,definitely,can be associated with the rapid urbanization in China,but what resulted in the differences above?For one thing,in recent years,China was characterized by the vigorous and prosperous economy,what enabled plenty of rural residents to possess additional income and purchase a house in the city. A case in point is my family.For another ,compared with the countryside,cities tend to enjoy better education,medical care and other public resources.Accordingly,an increasing number of youngsters choose to work and live in the city after graduation.

In conclusion,it can be clearly seen that the convenience of urban life and the concentration of public resources have accelerated the process of urbanization in China.It is expected that this trend will continue for a period of time.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：This is a column chart,clearly illustrating the striking contrasts in populations between urban and rural areas in China.

批改：明确指出图表类型并说明图表核心内容，简洁明了，为后文阐述做铺垫。

原文：During this period , the urban population climbed remarkably,from 300million to 666 million.

批改：准确描述了图表中城市人口的变化情况，数据引用清晰。

原文：By contrast,the rural population showed a trend of sharp decline ,from the peak of 834 million to 674 million.

批改：通过“By contrast”与上文形成对比，清晰阐述了农村人口的变化趋势。

原文：Such figures,definitely,can be associated with the rapid urbanization in China,but what resulted in the differences above?

批改：引出对现象原因的探讨，有一定的逻辑性。

原文：For one thing,in recent years,China was characterized by the vigorous and prosperous economy,what enabled plenty of rural residents to possess additional income and purchase a house in the city.

批改：提出了经济发展导致农村人口进城的原因，有一定合理性。“what”引导非限制性定语从句使用错误，应是“which”

原文：A case in point is my family.

批改：通过举例进一步说明观点，增强了说服力。此句单独成句稍显突兀，可与前文衔接更紧密。

原文：For another ,compared with the countryside,cities tend to enjoy better education,medical care and other public resources.

批改：从公共资源角度阐述农村人口流向城市的原因，逻辑清晰。

原文：Accordingly,an increasing number of youngsters choose to work and live in the city after graduation.

批改：基于前文原因，得出年轻人选择在城市生活的结论，逻辑连贯。

原文：In conclusion,it can be clearly seen that the convenience of urban life and the concentration of public resources have accelerated the process of urbanization in China.

批改：总结前文观点，概括了城市化加速的原因。

原文：It is expected that this trend will continue for a period of time.

批改：对未来趋势进行预测，符合题目要求。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

题目要求：文章紧扣题目要求，完成了对图表的解读和自身评论的阐述。开篇明确指出图表类型并清晰呈现城乡人口数量的变化趋势，完成了图表解读任务；中间段落深入剖析导致城乡人口变化的原因，结尾对未来趋势进行预测并给出总结性评论，整体上全面满足了题目设定的两个关键要求。

语言表达：文章整体逻辑连贯，采用“总 - 分 - 总”的结构。开头总述图表内容，中间分别从经济因素和公共资源因素两方面分析城乡人口变化原因，结尾总结并预测趋势，层次分明

内容层面：从经济发展和公共资源差异两个主要方面分析城乡人口变化的原因，具有一定的合理性和现实依据。经济繁荣使农村居民有更多收入进城购房，城市更好的教育、医疗等公共资源吸引年轻人定居，这些分析符合社会实际情况。

修改建议：仔细检查文章中的语法错误，特别是定语从句、时态等易错点。

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