2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart dearly depicts the proportion of some brands in the domestic car market during 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of the Chinese car brands was 25%, but by 2009. this rate had gradually risen to 30%. In contrast, the proportion of the Japanese car brands experienced a slow decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of the American ones remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of the domestic cars will steadily increse in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of the Japanese cars will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：dearly

批改：clearly

原文：during

批改：in

原文：The bar chart dearly depicts the proportion of some brands in the domestic car market during 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of the Chinese car brands was 25%, but by 2009. this rate had gradually risen to 30%. In contrast, the proportion of the Japanese car brands experienced a slow decline of 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of the American ones remained stable and steady.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to drive economic growth and elevate the purchasing power of the populace, allowing them to afford automobiles that were previously deemed luxury items. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development,the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of the domestic cars will steadily increse in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of the Japanese cars will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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