2014年考研英语二大作文失分点批改

2014年考研英语二大作文是考研英语作文模板备考清单中的必练题型。本文带来的高分批改范例，配套启航教育老师的逐句批注与预测话题标签，适合考研英语考生在冲刺阶段精读精练，是一套完整的写作提升资料。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the change in the population of urban and rural areas from 1990 to 2010. Over the 20-year period, the urban population in 2010 reached 666 million—roughly double that of 1990. Meanwhile, the rural population gradually declined. Around 2010, the urban and rural populations were roughly equal.

The core reasons for this observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this shift is the significant progress made by China’s urban and rural development in response to these changes. In addition, with the rapid advancement of society, people who once lived in rural areas have changed their ways of working and living. Many now prefer to work and live in cities. This explains the steady increase in the urban population. Considering these factors, the trend shown in the chart is not surprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the urban population will continue to rise steadily in the coming decades, while the rural population will likely keep declining.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the change in the population of urban and rural areas from 1990 to 2010. Over the 20-year period, the urban population in 2010 reached 666 million—roughly double that of 1990. Meanwhile, the rural population gradually declined. Around 2010, the urban and rural populations were roughly equal.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：The core reasons for this observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this shift is the significant progress made by China’s urban and rural development in response to these changes. In addition, with the rapid advancement of society, people who once lived in rural areas have changed their ways of working and living. Many now prefer to work and live in cities. This explains the steady increase in the urban population. Considering these factors, the trend shown in the chart is not surprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the urban population will continue to rise steadily in the coming decades, while the rural population will likely keep declining.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：14/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，词汇无错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

可以看出作文完成的非常认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬，再接再厉。

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