2011年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts some market share of domestic car brands in 2008 and 2009. In 2008, the percentage of Chinese brands was approximately 25%, but by 2009, this figure has substantially risen to around 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands experienced a significant decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the percentage of American brands remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. In addition, Chinese socrety is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progess made by China"s car manufacturing industry in responding to these changes.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of Chinese brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese and American brands will likely continue to decrease or remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： some market share

批改：此处描述的主要是变化，改为 the changes in market shares

原文：has

批改：此处为过去完成时，改为 had

原文：30%

批改：数字尽量写准确，改为 33%

批改：语法正确

批改：开头段表达不错，清晰地阐述了图表内容

批改：语法正确

批改：语法正确，内容表达也很好

原文： socrety

批改：society

批改：内容表达很好，也很具体

批改：语法正确

批改：结尾段表达很好，趋势预测与图表很切合

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12分/ 15分

题目要求：总体上来说是切题的，原因分析表达与图表的内容是贴合的

语言表达：存在一些小的细节表达问题，词汇表达不错，一些句式表达也很好

结构逻辑：文章的结构完整清晰，内容也比较丰富具体

修改建议：1. 语法问题结合作文批注仔细修改 2. 拼写要细心。之后可以多积累素材，自己多练练句子，进一步丰富自己的句式和观点储备，尽量多用自己的话来写，总的来说写的很好，加油！

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