考研英语一2025年大作文实例分析与批改

备战2025年考研英语大作文，先从研读经典高分范文开始。本文汇集的启航教育批改范文中，不仅有原文、批注，还有词汇注释与亮点解析。准备2027考研的同学，可联系启航教育在线咨询考研英语一写作高分规划。

一、考研英语一2025年大作文题目

考研英语一2025年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the table below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the table briefly, 2) interpret the table, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2025年大作文批改例文

What appears distinctly clear in the chart is that the volume of air conditioner holding, from 2014 to 2023, rocketed by 145.9 per hundred households. During the same period, the number of washing machine and refrigerator increased by 98.2 and 103.4. Its aim, as every individual can see it is to clarify a fact that the air conditioner is more popular.

Quite a few factors could account for my respective. The most essential one proves to be that with the development of the economy, so more persons that would like to holds the endurable consumer goods but also enjoy life. Another element that could be used here is that the air conditioner is more important as well as indispensable in a sort of sense, which could decline the temperature sharply in hot days. Then in the end , due to a major of families have not only one room, an air conditioner can not deal with the problem.

If the current tendency continues as it has, there, no doubt, will be more dynamic economy is．What a promising matter．

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： the volume of air conditioner holding

批改：“家电保有量” 常用 ownership of air conditioners

原文：washing machine and refrigerator

批改：需改为复数

原文： it is

批改：删去，插入语前后都要有逗号

原文：respective

批改：此处需改为名词 perspective（观点）

原文：so more persons that

批改：so...that... 搭配错误，且句子缺少谓语

原文：would like to holds

批改：需改为 are willing to purchase

原文：The most essential one proves to be that with the development of the economy, so more persons that would like to holds the endurable consumer goods but also enjoy life.

批改：整句可以参考：The most essential factor is that with the rapid development of the economy, an increasing number of people are not only able to purchase durable household appliances, but also eager to improve their quality of life.

原文：decline

批改：decline 是不及物动词，不能接宾语，“降温” 需用 lower the temperature

原文： due to

批改：due to 后接名词短语，不能接句子，需改为 since

原文：If the current tendency continues as it has, there, no doubt, will be more dynamic economy is．

批改：句式杂糅，If the current trend continues, there is no doubt that we will witness an even more vibrant economy.

原文：What appears distinctly clear in the chart is that the volume of air conditioner holding, from 2014 to 2023, rocketed by 145.9 per hundred households. During the same period, the number of washing machine and refrigerator increased by 98.2 and 103.4. Its aim, as every individual can see it is to clarify a fact that the air conditioner is more popular.

批改：描述图片内容，符合题目要求

原文：Quite a few factors could account for my respective. The most essential one proves to be that with the development of the economy, so more persons that would like to holds the endurable consumer goods but also enjoy life. Another element that could be used here is that the air conditioner is more important as well as indispensable in a sort of sense, which could decline the temperature sharply in hot days. Then in the end , due to a major of families have not only one room, an air conditioner can not deal with the problem.

批改：提出自己的观点，条理较为清晰

原文：If the current tendency continues as it has, there, no doubt, will be more dynamic economy is．What a promising matter．

批改：符合结尾段要求

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：15

这篇图表作文主题明确，聚焦 “空调保有量激增” 的核心趋势展开分析，结构上覆盖了 “图表描述 — 原因分析 — 未来展望” 的三段式框架。但存在以下核心问题需重点改进，语法与句式漏洞突出：出现句式杂糅（so...that... 误用）、谓语缺失等问题，建议写作时先搭建简单句框架，再逐步添加修饰成分。

词汇使用精准度低：存在用词错误（respective/perspective 混淆）、搭配不当（decline the temperature）等问题。希望继续努力，加油！

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