考研英语二2011年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2011年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、考研英语二2011年大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、考研英语二2011年大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the precentage of market share of brands in car marke,2008-2009.In 2008 the percentage of china brands was 25%,but by2009this rate had gradually risen to 30%.In Meanwhile the precentage of japan brands experienced slow increase 10%,,Simultaneously,the precentage of Us"s brands car remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenonmenon can be summarized as follows. To start with,Against the vackdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic developmenet ,the younger generation,are accustomed to using domestic appliances and have become the primaryconsumer group.In addition,chinese society is undergoing extensice and profound transformation. China"s industry in responding to these changes.Considering these factors,the depict phenonmenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statisical figures accurately and truthfully reflact the choices of youngers,will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：,2008-2009.

批改：from 2008 to 2009

原文：china

批改：China首字母大写

原文：In

批改：去掉

原文：japan

批改：国家名首字母大写Japanese日本的

批改：加of

原文：,,

批改：句号

原文：Us"s

批改：American

原文：he bar chart clearly depicts the precentage of market share of brands in car marke,2008-2009.In 2008 the percentage of china brands was 25%,but by2009this rate had gradually risen to 30%.In Meanwhile the precentage of japan brands experienced slow increase 10%,,Simultaneously,the precentage of Us"s brands car remained stable and steady.

批改：能够清晰的描绘图表中展现的内容，内容完整，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：phenonmenon

批改：phenomenon

原文：Against

批改：逗号后单词首字母小写

原文：vackdrop

批改：backdrop

原文：,

批改：逗号去掉

原文：chinese

批改：Chinese

原文： China"s industry in responding to these changes.

批改：这句话不完整

原文：depict

批改：depicted

原文：phenonmenon

批改：

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenonmenon can be summarized as follows. To start with,Against the vackdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic developmenet ,the younger generation,are accustomed to using domestic appliances and have become the primaryconsumer group.In addition,chinese society is undergoing extensice and profound transformation. China"s industry in responding to these changes.Considering these factors,the depict phenonmenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：youngers

批改：youngsters是名词

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statisical figures accurately and truthfully reflact the choices of youngers,will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：9/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，国家名是专有名词首字母要大写；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的完整；

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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