2014年考研英语二大作文失分点批改

据启航教育英语教研组统计，考研英语写作模板话题连续多年成为考研英语二大作文的高频考点。本文带来的2014年考研英语二批改例文中，考生通过对社会热点的精准分析与地道表达，获得高分，其写作思路可供2027考研英语二考生直接借鉴。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in urban and rural populations in China over a period of twenty years. In 1990,the urban population was approximately 300 million, but by 2010,this figure had substantially risen to around 666 million. In contrast, the rural population a slow decline of about 160 million during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system in cities,enabling rural residents to have ample opportunity to find job in urban areas. In addition, young people in rural areas,particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to seeking jobs in cities after graduation and have become the primary groups.considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I’m confident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades.In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：population

批改：漏了动词​​experienced​​

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes in urban and rural populations in China over a period of twenty years. In 1990,the urban population was approximately 300 million, but by 2010,this figure had substantially risen to around 666 million. In contrast, the rural population a slow decline of about 160 million during the same period

批改：信息描述清晰简洁

原文： job

批改： ​​jobs​​

原文：symphony

批改：删除

原文：groups

批改：建议改为the primary group migrating to cities，后面considering首字母大写

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with,as the conductor orchestrating the symphony the symphony of changes,our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound employment system in cities,enabling rural residents to have ample opportunity to find job in urban areas. In addition, young people in rural areas,particularly those born in the 1990s and 2000s, are accustomed to seeking jobs in cities after graduation and have become the primary groups.considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：词汇和语法结构丰富

原文：What about future trends? I’m confident that the number of urban population is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades.In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease.

批改：good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，状语从句，非谓语动词和强宾语从句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

复习考研英语大作文，务必要重视范文精读+专业批改的双向结合。启航教育2027考研英语斌哥写作锦囊冲刺抢分班，专为冲刺阶段考生打造，从话题预测到写作模板一应俱全，是考研英语写作模板写作提分的可靠方案。