2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2014年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二作文模板教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban population and rural population in China from 2019 to 2010. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666. In contrast, the number of of rural population experienced a slow decline of 160 during the same period.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people’s ways of live have undergone significant changes. This explains why an increasing number of people choose urban rather than rural. In addition, as the saying goes, “On life’s stage, pressure is always present.” Nowadays, peoples are compelled to confront immense life pressure, and as a result, living in urban has emerged as their significant choice. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： 2019

批改：1990

原文：of

批改：in

原文：300

批改：加million

原文：666

批改：加million

原文： of

批改：删除一个of

原文：160

批改：加million

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changes of urban population and rural population in China from 2019 to 2010. In 1990, the number of urban population was 300, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666. In contrast, the number of of rural population experienced a slow decline of 160 during the same period.

批改：注意语言细节

原文：ways of live

批改：ways of life

原文：urban rather than rural

批改：choose to live in urban areas rather than rural ones​​

原文： peoples

批改：去掉s

原文： in urban

批改：living in urban areas

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people’s ways of live have undergone significant changes. This explains why an increasing number of people choose urban rather than rural. In addition, as the saying goes, “On life’s stage, pressure is always present.” Nowadays, peoples are compelled to confront immense life pressure, and as a result, living in urban has emerged as their significant choice. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：词汇和语法丰富

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of urban population will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to remain relatively stable.

批改：good

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，非谓语结构和why引导的宾语从句句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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