考研英语一2023年大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、考研英语一2023年大作文题目

考研英语一2023年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay based on the picture below. In your essay, you should 1) describe the picture briefly, 2) interpret the implied meaning, and 3) give your comments. Write your answer in 160-200 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2023年大作文批改例文

As we can see from the depiction, two old persons, watching the match which is about two dragon boats’ comptetion, is saying that the match is more and more prevailing in their vallege and it is a good thing. Actually, it is a morning call to send us a message that we human beings should protect and inherit Chinese traditional cultures like dragon boat races.

To begin with, we should protect and retain the beneficial things in the traditinal cultures. It has many contents including positive and passive. The negative contents should be abandoned while the active should be held. It"s essential for us to acquire the ability to differentiate them. Furthermore, please advertise it trying your best. The dragon boat race is an appropriate example. Originally, dragon boat races were unfamiliar to most people. Thanks to prolonged publicity and cultural communication, they have become increasingly prevalent in recent years - many cities hold grand races during the Dragon Boat Festival now. It goes with exaggeration to say that retain and advertise Chinese traditional cultures.

Taking into account all analyses mentioned above, we may safely arrive at a conclusion that it is, unquestionably, beneficial to protect and inherit traditional cultures in our daily life.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： is

批改：are

原文：lle

批改：village

原文：d more prevailing in their vallege and it is a good thing. Actually, it is a morning call to send us a message that we human beings should protect and inherit Chinese traditional cultures like dragon boat races.

批改：描述漫画比较生动形象，具体完整，句子结构符合用英文写作要求，主题找的不错。

原文：ve

批改：后加名词，如果想要不重复名词，可以用代词，the active ones

原文：ryi

批改：and try your best

原文：etai

批改：we should retain...

原文：contents should be abandoned while the active should be held. It"s essential for us to acquire the ability to differentiate them. Furthermore, please advertise it trying your best. The dragon boat race is an appropriate example. Originally, dragon boat races were unfamiliar to most people. Thanks to prolonged publicity and cultural communication, they have become increasingly prevalent in recent years - many cities hold grand races during the Dragon Boat Festival now. It goes with exaggeration to say that retain and advertise Chinese traditional cultures.

批改：能看出来考生是有思考的，内容比较贴近现实哦，论述比较接近题目意思，但是一些语法错误比较明显哦，注意修改。

原文：yse

批改：analysis

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：16/20

语法：语法注意词性的用法哦，adj修饰名词，后面名词不能丢哦，注意句子成分不能丢也不能漏哦，要符合英文语法规则，that引导的宾从注意后面成分使用哦。。

逻辑：整体逻辑可以的，整体很通顺。

词汇：单词整体还行，但是有错的哦，注意修改。

内容：内容比较符合题意要求，结构合理。

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