考研英语一2017年大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2017年考研英语一批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语一大作文教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、考研英语一2017年大作文题目

考研英语一2017年大作文52. Directions: Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following pictures. In your essay, you should1) describe the pictures briefly, 2) interpret the meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2017年大作文批改例文

The two pictures contrast two scenarios about reading books. In the left one, a man, laying on the chair next to a bookshelf with a bunch of books, is sighing and saying: “I have so many books!” In the right one, on the other hand, a man in front of the table, sitting in a chair, is saying :" I"m striving to read twenty books this year." while reading a book. Obviously, the author is trying to tell us the importance of reading books.

To begin with, only if you read books, you could get knowledge. There"re many valuable things in books. They aren"t your thing if you have books but just put them aside. Furthermore, by reading books, you can improve your abilities, such as analytical skill, language ability and so on. As the left picture showing, the man seem loss the ability of taking action immediately, he is looking at the books but doesn"t read them. But in the right one, the man haves the ability of making plan, he is intending the year"s plan about reading books. It goes with no exaggeration to say that reading books is nothing but a necessity.

Taking into account all analyses mentioned above, we may safely arrive at a conclusion that it is, unquestionably, beneficial to read books in our daily life.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： laying

批改：lying

原文：only if you read books, you could get knowledge

批改：Only if you read books can you gain knowledge only if引导从句时，主句需部分倒装 用can现在时即可

原文： showing

批改：shows

原文：seem

批改：seems

原文：loss

批改：loses

原文：doesn"t read

批改：isn"t reading 与前文 “is looking” 时态保持一致

原文：haves

批改：has

原文：with no exaggeration

批改：固定短语 “without exaggeration” 意为 “毫不夸张地”

原文：intending the year"s plan

批改：make a plan“制定计划”

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：5/20

1.题目要求：字数符合题目要求。题目侧重于“有书”与“读书”的区别，揭示了当今社会中存在的一种现象：有些人只是为了炫耀自己的文化品位而收集大量书籍，忽略了真正的阅读行为。而不是说“读书的益处”。文章主旨有些偏差。

2.语言表达：语言表达清晰。个别地方在语法运用和单词拼写上还有提升空间，要多留意这部分细节。

3.内容层面：文章内容与题目要求有些偏差，考生需要留意，一定要阅读好题目要求，读懂要我们表达什么。

4.修改意见：文章整体较完整，结构较为清晰，按照描述漫画、阐述哲理和提出呼吁的顺序进行写作。但是建议考生在写作前先读懂题目要求，特别是图画下面的文字信息。要记住英语考卷中难得出现的中文肯定是有用处的。另外，写作完成后可以多花时间检查，让语法运用和单词拼写更准确，进一步提升文章质量，不要因为一些小错误而失分。

现在在临考前主要做的事情是：查漏补缺自己不会的单词和基本语法如单复数、时态，以及模板句的熟练运用。如果对题目要求把握不住的，可以找几篇作文，思考这篇文章我该怎么写、内容要写什么、可以运用什么模板句等等，然后再对照范文及解析，提高自己的写作敏感性。

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