考研英语一2010年大作文失分点批改

本文是一份经过启航教育整理的2010年考研英语一大作文批改资料，对照考研英语作文万能句型写作框架与评分标准进行精细讲解。无论是词汇句式、段落衔接还是逻辑展开，本文都能为考研英语考生提供可直接套用的范例。

一、考研英语一2010年大作文题目

考研英语一2010年大作文Directions:Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should1) describe the drawing briefly,2) explain its intended meaning, and 3) give your comments. You should write neatly on the ANSWER SHEET. (20 points)

二、考研英语一2010年大作文批改例文

As shown in the cartoon, there is a hot pot boiling which is full

of culture elements, such as Shakespeare, Lao She, KungFu and

so on. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey the readers that it is different cultures that play an important and positive role

both in our personal lives and in society.

This phenomenon is thought-provoking in several ways. but

two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand,

different cultures can nurture our souls, and promote personal

growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and

meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. On the other hand, in modern society full of changes, chances and challenges,

culture has become a key factor that distingwishes exceptional

individuals from ordinary people, and its significance has become increasingly evident.

In brief, culture, is the catalyst for societal and personal

development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we

should actively support and advocate this quality. We should

actively promote and carry forward traditional culture. Only by

doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：convey

批改：convey to

原文：shown in the cartoon, there is a hot pot boiling which is full of culture elements, such as Shakespeare, Lao She, KungFu and so on. Evidently, the cartoonist intends to convey the readers that it is different cultures that play an important and positive role both in our personal lives and in society.

批改：描述漫画内容，揭示漫画背后所反映的社会现象和深刻哲理，清晰直观。

原文：distingwishes

批改：distinguishes

原文：henomenon is thought-provoking in several ways. but two of them are particularly significant. On the one hand, different cultures can nurture our souls, and promote personal growth and self-fulfillment, thus making life rewarding and meaningful, rather than being self-consuming. On the other hand, in modern society full of changes, chances and challenges, culture has become a key factor that distingwishes exceptional individuals from ordinary people, and its significance has become increasingly evident.

批改：以分论点的形式论述文化交流的重要性，逻辑严谨，层次分明。

原文：ief, culture, is the catalyst for societal and personal development, from which we all stand to benefit. Therefore, we should actively support and advocate this quality. We should actively promote and carry forward traditional culture. Only by doing so can we make our world shine with renewed brilliance.

批改：总结全文，升华主题，展望未来，立意深远。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：17/20

这篇文章内容完整充实，结构清晰合理，逻辑严谨，层次分明，句型表达丰富。

词汇：考试时可以多积累高级词汇，写作文就能用上，但尤其注意单词拼写不要出现明显错误，特别是与主题词相关的单词要重点留意。

内容：第一段为传统的图画描述段，根据图画中的具体信息，尤其是下面的文字说明，进行直接描述。第二段以分论点的形式阐释图画寓意，文化的融合和交流问题，逻辑严谨，层次分明。最后一段表明作者本人对文化融合和交流这种现象的态度或看法，此评论部分可以提出建议，考虑背景及原因，或描述未来。

整体来看，作文理解了漫画内涵，段落框架明确，大体上与题目要求保持一致，但是在表达上还存在一定问题。从点评中可以看出作文中有一些表述不当之处，后续继续注重练习，加油！

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