2023年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2023年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文话题图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2023年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2023年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The line chart cleary depicts the level of health literacy among residents in China from 2012 to 2021. In 2012, the percentage of health literacy level was 8.8%, but by 2046, this rate gradually risen to 11.58%. In contrast, this percentage experienced a significant increase of 13.82% from 2016 to 2021.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s healthcare industry in responding to these changes. In addition, as we all know, the outbreak of COVID-19 has impacted every aspect of our lives, significantly altering people"s behaviors and choices. Consequently, an increasing number of indivaduals have started playing more attention to health. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of health literacy level is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：2046

批改：2016

原文：rate

批改：后加had

原文：The line chart cleary depicts the level of health literacy among residents in China from 2012 to 2021. In 2012, the percentage of health literacy level was 8.8%, but by 2046, this rate gradually risen to 11.58%. In contrast, this percentage experienced a significant increase of 13.82% from 2016 to 2021.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s healthcare industry in responding to these changes. In addition, as we all know, the outbreak of COVID-19 has impacted every aspect of our lives, significantly altering people"s behaviors and choices. Consequently, an increasing number of indivaduals have started playing more attention to health. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of health literacy level is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，注意时态的正确使用。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。

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