2024年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2024年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2024年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2024年考研英语二大作文批改例文

This bar chart arranges the percentage of college students’main gains from labor practise courses, displaying that the learning of relevant knowledge takes the lead at 91.3%, followed by the improvement in practical ability at 84.8%. Additionally, gains shuch as enhancement of teamwork ability and feeling delighted are also considered, accounting for 32.6%, 54.4%, respectively.

Several factors could weigh heavily for the main gains from labor practise courses, yet suspended at the top of the list are the following two aspects. To begin with, practising courses functions as a bridge to combine theory with practise, through which people can not only acquire new knowledge from courses but also test the knowledge through practise. Meanwhile, the difficulty of the course and most practical tasks need to be completed independently are factors that cannot be overlooked, as it leads to the low percentage of teamwork ability and the mood.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of college students, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era, and will likely remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： shuch

批改：such

原文：arranges the percentage

批改：表达有误 clearly shows the percentage breakdown

原文：the learning of relevant knowledge

批改：优化 acquiring relevant knowledge

批改：紧扣题干中的数据展开分析，结构清晰，主题明确，整体分析全面准确；

原文： functions

批改：function 主语是复数

原文： need

批改：needing 现在分词作定语

批改：结合题干数据展现的内容，进行了论述分析，分析较为全面，包含一定要点。

批改：预判了趋势的积极方向，整体认知清晰，句子结构完整，无语法错误

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11

评语：文章结构布局合理，层次分明，整体框架清晰明确；逻辑上，各个部分之间的衔接紧密自然，没有出现明显的逻辑漏洞或矛盾；内容上，观点明确，且每个观点都有相应的论据支撑，增强了文章的说服力；语言表达上，需要注意细节语法错误（非谓语、三单）。继续加油！

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