2014年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

启航教育考研英语教研组精心筛选了2014年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改范例。本篇范文中，老师对每一句都给出修改建议，是考研英语二作文范文备考资料库中的精品，特别推荐给参加2027考研的学子。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changing about the numbers of village people and city people in China from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of city people was 300, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666. In contrast, the numble of city people experienced a decline of 160 from 1990 to 2010.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. The start with, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, move to a big city is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to build a sound social system, enabling people to ample opportunities for going to the big city. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of city people will steadily increase in the follow decades. In contrast, the number of village people will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：changing about the numbers of village people and city people

批改： ​​changes​​ in the ​​populations​​ of rural and urban residents

原文：300

批改：加million

原文：666

批改：加million

原文：160

批改：加million

原文：numble of city people

批改： rural residents，该农村居民了

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changing about the numbers of village people and city people in China from 1990 to 2010. In 1990, the number of city people was 300, but by 2010, this figure had substantially risen to 666. In contrast, the numble of city people experienced a decline of 160 from 1990 to 2010.

批改：对图表内容描述不够准确

原文：move

批改：moving 动名词做主语

原文：ample opportunities for going to

批改：have​​ ample opportunities to move to

原文：the big city

批改： big cities

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. The start with, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, move to a big city is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. In addition, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our goverment has made tremendous efforts to build a sound social system, enabling people to ample opportunities for going to the big city. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：词汇和语法结构丰富

原文：follow

批改：following

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明，需要注意语法细节错误；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.要多内化老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，形成自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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