2023年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

对于考研英语一而言，2023年大作文常以图画形式呈现。本文精解的这篇图画批改范例，启航教育老师逐句解读图画细节、寓意提炼与评论展开三步走，是考研英语作文万能句型图画作文的经典教学样本。

一、2023年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2023年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The line chart clearly depicts the level of our residents health literacy from 2012 to 2021. In 2012, the number of the health literacy was 8.8%. but by 2021, the figure has substantially risen to 25.4%

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound policy system, improving residents" health literacy. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitudes towards health have undergone significant changes. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to improve the level of health literacy. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the number of the level of our residents" health literacy will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：number

批改：proportion

原文：The line chart clearly depicts the level of our residents health literacy from 2012 to 2021. In 2012, the number of the health literacy was 8.8%. but by 2021, the figure has substantially risen to 25.4%

批改：清晰简要地描述了图表信息，言简意赅。

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound policy system, improving residents" health literacy. In addition, in the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, people"s attitudes towards health have undergone significant changes. This explains why an increasing number of people choose to improve the level of health literacy. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：number

批改：proportion

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the number of the level of our residents" health literacy will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，注意根据图表内容恰当选词，百分比用proportion或percentage；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。

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