2013年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2013年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2013年大作文Directions:Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2013年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the situation of students doing parttime jobs in one university. In freshman year, the percentage of students doing parttime jobs was 67.77%, but by senior year, this rate had substantially risen to 88.24%. Simultoneously, the percentage remained stable and steady in sophomore and junior years.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, students are curious about the society and willing to do parttime jobs in freshman year, which can stand for their independence. In addition, when students are in senior year, an increasing number of them believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, parttime jobs is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident the number of students doing parttime jobs will steadily increase in the following decades, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：Simultoneously

批改：Simultaneously

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the situation of students doing parttime jobs in one university. In freshman year, the percentage of students doing parttime jobs was 67.77%, but by senior year, this rate had substantially risen to 88.24%. Simultoneously, the percentage remained stable and steady in sophomore and junior years.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：parttime

批改：前加上taking，应该是做兼职

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, students are curious about the society and willing to do parttime jobs in freshman year, which can stand for their independence. In addition, when students are in senior year, an increasing number of them believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, parttime jobs is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够细致分析图表中现象产生的原因，句子结构连贯完整。

批改：加that

原文：What about future trends? I am confident the number of students doing parttime jobs will steadily increase in the following decades, serving as a microcosm of the changes in the era.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意句子结构的完整；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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