2019年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语二作文真题每年的命题都会折射出当年的社会热点。本文呈现的2019年考研英语二批改范例，从生活实际出发，紧扣命题意图。启航教育老师在批注中详细指出了图（表）描述、原因分析与建议评论的合理答题节奏。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts on undergraduate graduation destinations of a certain university(2013 and 2018). In 2013, the percentage of looking for jobs was 68.1%, but by 2018, this rate had substantially decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of continuing study experienced a significant increase of 7.7% during the same period. Simultaneously,the percentage of starting one’s own business remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, improving their education level is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart/table is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of looking for jobs and continuing study will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of starting one’s own business will likely continue to decrease relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： a certain university

批改：“a certain university” 虽然语法正确，但略显模糊，建议改为“a university”或“one university”即可

原文：2013 and 2018)

批改：括号使用不规范，在正式写作中应避免括号，可用“in 2013 and 2018”来表达

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts on undergraduate graduation destinations of a certain university(2013 and 2018

批改：建议：The bar chart clearly depicts the undergraduate graduation destinations of a university in 2013 and 2018

原文：the percentage of looking for jobs

批改：搭配不清晰，“the percentage of looking for jobs” 正确表达应为 the percentage of graduates looking for jobs 或更准确地说 the percentage choosing to look for jobs。

原文：this rate

批改：可以改为：this figure 更加流畅

原文： experienced a significant increase of 7.7%

批改：“experienced a significant increase of 7.7%” 表达不够清晰。是增加了7.7个百分点（percentage points），还是增长了7.7%？根据图表语境，应是“增加了7.7个百分点”，所以应说 increased by 7.7 percentage points

原文： continuing study

批改：这个搭配很别扭，有些中式英语“the proportion of continuing study” 应为 the proportion of students continuing their studies

原文：7.7

批改：图表中有具体数据，建议写出具体数字以增强说服力

原文：the percentage of starting one’s own business

批改： 建议：the percentage of graduates starting their own businesses。

原文：decrease relatively stable

批改：这个可以给点原因，增强说服力，例如：due to high risks and lack of support.

原文：as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education

批改：表达不错，比喻还可以

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound education system, enabling university students to have ample opportunities for further education. In addition, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, improving their education level is indispensable if they wish to achieve success in the long run.. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart/table is unsurprising.

批改：整段都没啥大问题，逻辑清晰，论据也很明确

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15

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