2011年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

启航教育在考研英语写作教学中反复强调：词汇与句式的高级化是考研英语作文高分的关键。本文整理的2011年考研英语二批改范例，几乎每一段都包含高分替换词与衔接词，是考研英语二大作文写作锦囊中的代表性范文。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts market share of some brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008. the percentage of domestic brand was 25%, but by 2009, the rate had substantially risen to 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Janpanese brand experienced a significant decline of 10% during the same period. Stimulaneously, the percentage of American brand remained stable and steady.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, the outbreak of the economic crisis of 200s has impacted every aspect of our lives. significantly altering people"s behaviors and choices. Consequently, an increasing number of individuals have choosen domestic car brand. In addition. Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. More and more people trust our own brand. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chait is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brand will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, others will likely continue to decrease or remain relatively stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

批改：逗号

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts market share of some brands in the domestic car market from 2008 to 2009. In 2008. the percentage of domestic brand was 25%, but by 2009, the rate had substantially risen to 30%. In contrast, the proportion of Janpanese brand experienced a significant decline of 10% during the same period. Stimulaneously, the percentage of American brand remained stable and steady.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：200s

批改：年份错误

批改：逗号

批改：逗号

原文：chait

批改：chart

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, the outbreak of the economic crisis of 200s has impacted every aspect of our lives. significantly altering people"s behaviors and choices. Consequently, an increasing number of individuals have choosen domestic car brand. In addition. Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s manufacturing industry in responding to these changes. More and more people trust our own brand. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chait is unsurprising.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of domestic brand will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, others will likely continue to decrease or remain relatively stable.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：11/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的比较认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免标点符号使用错误。再接再厉。

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