2011年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

考研英语作文失分点多、提分空间大，一直是2011年考研英语二备考生核心痛点之一。本文围绕考研英语二大作文话题，给出一篇经过启航教育老师精细批改的高分范文，文中不仅有逐句批注，还附有可复制的考研英语二高分写作模板。

一、2011年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2011年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart and 2) give your comments. You should write at least 150 words. Write your essay on ANSWER SHEET 2. (15 points)

二、2011年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the changing domestic market proportion of car brands. In 2008, the proportion of domestic brands was approximately 27%, but by 2009, the figure had risen to around 33%. In contrast, the percentage of Japanese brands experienced a decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the proportion of American brands remained stable and steady. The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.

To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s car industry in responding to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1970s and 1980s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the phenomenon depicted in the chart is unsurprising.

What about future trends? I"m confident that the proportion of domestic brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands will likely continue to decrease.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：reason

批改：reasons复数

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the changing domestic market proportion of car brands. In 2008, the proportion of domestic brands was approximately 27%, but by 2009, the figure had risen to around 33%. In contrast, the percentage of Japanese brands experienced a decline of about 10% during the same period. Simultaneously, the proportion of American brands remained stable and steady. The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.

批改：能够准确地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯完整。

原文：To start with, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the fundamental reason for this phenomenon is the significant progress made by China"s car industry in responding to these changes. In addition, against the backdrop of our country"s rapid and dynamic development, the younger generation, particularly those born in the 1970s and 1980s, are accustomed to using domestic cars and have become the primary consumer group. Considering these factors, the phenomenon depicted in the chart is unsurprising.

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词分析图表中现象的背后原因，全面细致。

原文：What about future trends? I"m confident that the proportion of domestic brands will steadily increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of Japanese brands will likely continue to decrease.

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，注意名词单复数的正确选取；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的非常认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免小的语言错误。再接再厉。

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