2019年考研英语二大作文写作方向与示例

作为考研英语备考的核心模块，2019年考研英语二大作文承载了大量学生的提分期待。本文带来的这篇批改例文，紧扣考研英语二作文模板常见话题，由启航教育资深英语教研团队逐句批改，详细标注语法、词汇与逻辑三大失分点，是考研英语写作提分的优质资料。

一、2019年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2019年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should 1) interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2019年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly depicts the proportion of undergraduates" choices at a certain university. In 2013, the percentage of finding a job was 68.1%, but by 2018, the proportion had decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of seeking master degree experienced an increase of 7.7%. Simultaneously, the proportion of starting a business remained stable. The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.

To start with, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, having a master degree is indispensable if they want to achieve success in the long run. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the core reason for the phenomenon is the great demand for masters required by China"s industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

What about future trends? I"m confident that the proportion of seeking master degree is a clear sign of social improvement and will likely continue to increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of finding a job will likely continue to decrease and the proportion of starting a business will likely remain stable.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文： master degree

批改：seek后面接for，改为pursuing master"s degrees

原文：The bar chart clearly depicts the proportion of undergraduates" choices at a certain university. In 2013, the percentage of finding a job was 68.1%, but by 2018, the proportion had decreased to 60.7%. In contrast, the proportion of seeking master degree experienced an increase of 7.7%. Simultaneously, the proportion of starting a business remained stable. The core reason for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows.

批改：棒，准确描述了图表内容

原文：To start with, an increasing number of young people believe that in modern society full of changes, challenges, and chances, having a master degree is indispensable if they want to achieve success in the long run. In addition, Chinese society is undergoing an extensive and profound transformation. In my view, the core reason for the phenomenon is the great demand for masters required by China"s industry in responding to these changes. Considering these factors, the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

批改：论据充分，词汇和句法丰富

原文：seeking master degree

批改：pursuing master"s degrees

原文：What about future trends? I"m confident that the proportion of seeking master degree is a clear sign of social improvement and will likely continue to increase in the following decades. In contrast, the proportion of finding a job will likely continue to decrease and the proportion of starting a business will likely remain stable.

批改：good，总结趋势，照应主题

原文：reason

批改：下面多个原因，用复数

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：12/15分。

1.作文内容包含全面，主题明确，层次分明；

2.运用复杂的语法结构和高级词汇，状语从句，非谓语结构和宾语从句句型很棒；

3.采用恰当的衔接手法，内容较为连贯；

4.已经能开始运用老师讲的高分词汇和模板句型，很棒，继续丰富自己的语料库和写作思路，加油！

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