2023年考研英语二大作文真题与例文批改

一篇高分的考研英语大作文，常常具备结构清晰、句式多变、词汇地道三大特点。本文精解的2023年考研英语二批改范例，每一段都体现了这三大要素，启航教育考研英语二作文模板教研组对该范文进行了详细的亮点标注。

一、2023年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2023年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文

As is illustrated in the statistics among Chinese citizens about health literacy level, the percentage of health literacy level increased from 8.80% to 25.40% in the ten year s between 2012 and 2021.From my perspective, the above figures reveal a currently prevailing tendency among contemporary society.

To examine the root cause of this tendency, certain factors should be specifically pointed out here. First and foremost, just as Karl Marx once said, the economic basis determines the superstructure. Given the shifting economic atmosphere and the state of affairs, it is not surprising for us to witness the above-mentioned tendency. What"s more, the phenomenon under discussion could be attributed to the shift of relevant population"s values.In addition, social media platforms substantially facilitate the flow and intensification of certain awareness, thus accelerating the transition from an emerging phenomenon into the new reality

In conclusion, this tendency is of profound inevitability, and will continue to exist in the foreseeable future. Correspondingly, as the vanguard and successor of our society, we should grasp the pulse of this trend, surf the wave of this era, and actively meet whatever challenges and opportunities it may bring forth.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：As is illustrated in the statistics among Chinese citizens about health literacy level, the percentage of health literacy level increased from 8.80% to 25.40% in the ten year s between 2012 and 2021.From my perspective, the above figures reveal a currently prevailing tendency among contemporary society.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：population"s

批改：population是人口，改成people"s

原文：To examine the root cause of this tendency, certain factors should be specifically pointed out here. First and foremost, just as Karl Marx once said, the economic basis determines the superstructure. Given the shifting economic atmosphere and the state of affairs, it is not surprising for us to witness the above-mentioned tendency. What"s more, the phenomenon under discussion could be attributed to the shift of relevant population"s values.In addition, social media platforms substantially facilitate the flow and intensification of certain awareness, thus accelerating the transition from an emerging phenomenon into the new reality

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：In conclusion, this tendency is of profound inevitability, and will continue to exist in the foreseeable future. Correspondingly, as the vanguard and successor of our society, we should grasp the pulse of this trend, surf the wave of this era, and actively meet whatever challenges and opportunities it may bring forth.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行分析总结并提出自己的建议。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，注意用词的恰当性；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。再接再厉。

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