2014年考研英语二大作文实例分析与批改

2014年考研英语二大作文围绕哪一类话题命题？本文精选的范文聚焦考研英语二写作冲刺话题方向，结合启航教育多年考研英语二教学沉淀，从描述图表、解读寓意到发表评论三大角度，完整呈现高分作文的内在结构。

一、2014年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2014年大作文Write an essay based on the following chart. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、2014年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The bar chart clearly displays the change in urban and rural populations. In 1990, the number of rural populations was 834, but by 2010, this figure had substantially dereased to 674. In contrast, the number of urban populations experienced a significant increase 366 during the same period

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows, To start with, In the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, rural residents need highter quality of life, more and more people tend leaving their original places of residence to live in cities. In addition, cities offer more opportunities for success.In my view, the fundamental reason for this phononenon is the significant progress made by China"s urban infrastructure construction in responding to these changes. Considering these factors. the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of rural residents.Urban population will steadily increase in the following decades.In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：834

批改：后加单位million

原文：674

批改：后加单位million

批改：加of

原文：366

批改：后加单位million

原文：The bar chart clearly displays the change in urban and rural populations. In 1990, the number of rural populations was 834, but by 2010, this figure had substantially dereased to 674. In contrast, the number of urban populations experienced a significant increase 366 during the same period

批改：要看清图表中是否有单位

原文：In

批改：逗号后的单词首字母小写

原文：highter

批改：higher

原文：tend leaving

批改：tend to do sth，改成tend to leave

批改：逗号

原文：The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows, To start with, In the wake of the high-speed advancement of society, rural residents need highter quality of life, more and more people tend leaving their original places of residence to live in cities. In addition, cities offer more opportunities for success.In my view, the fundamental reason for this phononenon is the significant progress made by China"s urban infrastructure construction in responding to these changes. Considering these factors. the depicted phenomenon in the chart is unsurprising

批改：能够运用逻辑关系词对图表中的现象进行分析论述，注意避免小的语言错误。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of rural residents.Urban population will steadily increase in the following decades.In contrast, the number of rural population will likely continue to decrease

批改：分析并预测了未来的趋势，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：10/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够准确全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，基础词汇一定要避免拼写错误，固定搭配要记牢；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变，但是要注意正确使用标点符号进行断句；语法方面，总体来看语法基础不错。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。一定要细心一些，注意避免以上小的细节问题。再接再厉。

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