考研英语二2016年大作文失分点批改

本文整理了2016年考研英语二大作文真题原文及高分批改例文，是备考考研英语作文真题范文的实用素材。考研英语作文在考研英语中占据重要分值，历年真题范文能够帮助考生快速把握命题规律与评分要点，下面让我们一同走进这篇批改范文。

一、考研英语二2016年大作文题目

考研英语二2016年大作文Write an essay based on the chart below. In your writing, you should1) interpret the chart, and2) give your comments.You should write about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET.

二、考研英语二2016年大作文批改例文

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The pie chart clearly displays the percentage breakdown of the targets of students’ travel in certain school. The percentage of appreciating landscape takes the lead at 37%, followed by mitigating pressure at 33%. Additionally, factors such as expanding the network of friends, cultivating the ability of independence, and others are also considered, accounting for 9%, 6%, and 15%.

The core reasons for the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. First and foremost, as the saying goes: “on life’s stage, ressure is always present.” Nowadays, the university students are compelled to confront immense academic pressure. And as a result, appreciating landscape and mitigating pressure have emerged as their significant choices for utilizing leisure time. In addition, as we all know, the outbreak of COVID-19 has impacted every aspect of lives，significantly altering students’ behaviors and choices. Consequently, an increasing number of students have started paying more attention to go outside.

What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of students, serving as a microcosm of changes in the students’ era, and will remain relatively stable in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：in certain school

批改：学校前加定冠词/不定冠词，介词一般用at，改为 at a certain school

原文：ressure

批改：单词拼写错误，改为 pressure

原文：go

批改：在英语中，“pay attention to”后面应该接动名词（doing），而不是不定式（do）,所以改为going

原文：the outbreak of COVID-19

批改：特别要注意的是，这句话有时间限制，可在19年之后的作文中出现

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the above statistical figures accurately and truthfully reflect the choices of students, serving as a microcosm of changes in the students’ era, and will remain relatively stable in the following decades.

批改：万能结尾句给出合理预测。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

从结构层面看，本文脉络清晰，采用三段式写作，开头清楚表明图片，中间进行了分析，最后做出了总结；

从内容层面看，第二段的分析很好，内容详实，丰富具体；

从语言层面看，重点单词拼写错误考试时一定要避免；语法上可数名词前一定要有冠词，短语的用法要清楚to在这里是介词。

建议：检查单词拼写，多积累短语的固定用法。

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