2023年考研英语二大作文考了什么？附真题回顾及例文批改

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一、2023年考研英语二大作文题目

考研英语二2023年大作文48. Directions: Write an essay based on the chart below. In your essay, you should 1) describe and interpret the chart, and 2) give your comments. Write your answer in about 150 words on the ANSWER SHEET. (15 points)

二、2023年考研英语二大作文批改例文

The line chart clearly depicts the good health of Chinese residents from 2012 to 2021. In 2012, the percentage of good health was 8.8%, but by 2016, this rate had gradually risen to 11.58%. In contrast, the proportion of good health experienced a sigficant increase of 13.82% from 2016 to 2021.

The core reasons of the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound exercising system, enabling our country"s residents to have ample opportunities for going to exercise. In addition, as the saying goes, “On life"s stage, pressure is always present," Nowadays, our country"s residents are compelled to confront immense work pressure, and as a regult, going to exercise has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time.

What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of the good health among Chinese residents is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades.

三、考研英语作文批改

原文：The line chart clearly depicts the good health of Chinese residents from 2012 to 2021. In 2012, the percentage of good health was 8.8%, but by 2016, this rate had gradually risen to 11.58%. In contrast, the proportion of good health experienced a sigficant increase of 13.82% from 2016 to 2021.

批改：能够完整地描绘出图表的信息，句子连贯。

原文：The core reasons of the observed phenomenon can be summarized as follows. To start with, as the conductor orchestrating the symphony of changes, our government has made tremendous efforts to build a sound exercising system, enabling our country"s residents to have ample opportunities for going to exercise. In addition, as the saying goes, “On life"s stage, pressure is always present," Nowadays, our country"s residents are compelled to confront immense work pressure, and as a regult, going to exercise has emerged as their significant choice for utilizing leisure time.

批改：能够具体阐释出图表背后的真实意义，能够运用逻辑关系词连接句子，使得句与句之间衔接连贯，望继续保持。

原文：What about future trends? I am confident that the proportion of the good health among Chinese residents is a clear sign of social improvement and will steadily increase in the following decades.

批改：能够对图表中的现象进行总结和预测，言简意赅。

四、考研英语作文评分

得分：13/15

1）内容符合题目的要求，能够全面的描绘出图表中的内容。

2）词汇方面，无拼写错误；句式方面，能够运用一些复杂句式，句型结构灵活多变；语法方面，总体来看语法基础没有问题。

3）逻辑结构清晰完整，论证较为充分。能够运用一些逻辑关系词来连接句子，符合英语句子结构的要求。

4）修改建议：可以看出作文完成的很认真，内容充分，语言逻辑清晰，值得表扬。再接再厉。

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